Another of Joel’s Poems
[Joel],
I just looked at your “It’s Only A Game” poem. Short and sweet, ‘eh? It seemed compact and nicely descriptive. However I had trouble reading it well because it appears that either the original formatting was lost or you left out the punctuation except for a final period. Perhaps you omitted the punctuation for effect. But its absence does make for distracted reading, and can therefore, obscure your message from your readers. You might want to look at it and make adjustments accordingly.
I’ve attached the copy you sent originally so you can verify that this was in fact, how you formatted it before sending to me.
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Later,
Tom Hesley